Theo Hart

I see what you mean about the ending, too. I forgot to consider that, standing alone, the prologue doesn't show that Emmy is not the protagonist. She is a character ...

Hey, this is the lead character for my current major project, and I was wondering if you guys could give some critiques--tell me if I'm missing some major character distinctives, ...

Yeah, I've gotta' agree that the design looks too busy. (Probably looks better in person, though--not as a wee' little "Jay-Peg") Love the cube, though.

I like your style--it flows quite well. Very easy to read, while simultaneously including slight subtleties. Very nice. I do have a few issues, however: They, they who care, who ...

Whoo-dang, you are evil ! I love it, thus far. Didn't see any major problems with the narrative structure. Everything, in that area, is pretty clear. I also liked how ...

I was searching for something stupid and inconsequential on Google images, probably to make a new avatar, when one of the images linked back to YWS. I clicked, registered, and... ...

Ah... randomness. In any case, my name's Theo Hart, I'm an aspiring Fantasy/Sci-fi Writer/Future Librarian. I was a member of a, now, unfortunately, deceased, young writer's forum called Absynthemuse,